Anglik pomocy

[striełok 12]

Witam odrazu powiem z angielskiego jestem cienki nie umiek prostego zdania napisac i mam prosbe czy ktos zaznajomiony z tematem moze mi spr moje zadanie. Zalezy mi na ocenie 3 za to zadnie cyz jest szansa i czy mozecie to zadanie w jakis sposob ulepszyc
My plans on weekend. On Friday after school I'm going to my friend and I'll spend there a few hours. Then I'll go on square in Szczawnica to meet with my friends. Most probably I'll be home at 11pm.
On Saturdays I always get up about 10. First thing which I'm going to do is cleaning my teeth. Next I'll hoover entire house. Now i have free Sunday;)) So at 18 I'll go on square again. I'll meet Ania from Belchatow. She is 14 too. I met Ania on holidays. Probably I'll be home at 11pm too.
On Sunday I must get up earlier because I have to be in church on 10am. After church I'll play on guitar or computer games. Then I'll make up all of my homework in order to go on square. I'll come back at 20pm or 21pm than I'll talk with my friends by gadu-gadu. Next at 23pm I'll go to sleep.
Rest of the week I'll spend so as ever. I'll get up early, go on bus then by him to school. After school I'll make up for given homeworks. When I finish I'll go on square. Probably I'll be back at 20pm than I'll play the guitar.

[Budosz]

Na 3 to na pewno jest szansa, bo w większości jest poprawnie gramatycznie, ale dużo zależny od twojego nauczyciela.

[Robert]

First thing which I'm going to do is cleaning my teeth.

First thing which I'm always do is cleaning my teeth

Now I have free Sunday, so ....

Now I have free time on Sunday, so ...

I'll meet Ania from Belchatow

tutaj bardziej going to

Probably I'll be home at 11pm too.

a to nie wiem po co dodałeś

church on 10am

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za dużo will dajesz
going to = 99% ,że coś zrobisz
a will ,że masz tak w planach, ale może się zmienić (przynajmniej tak nauczyciele mi tłumaczyli)

After school I'll make up for given homeworks

:E może I'm going to do my homework.

jeśli się ktoś nie zgadza śmiało pisać, nie jestem mistrzem angielskiego